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[Needs More Whales]

good idea

I really like this idea, you should definitely make another...but string it out, more pointless conversation. Example: maybe 3 characters - two discuss the actual art, then the third's opinion is 'I think it needs more whales' and slow down the delivery. also, think about the audience - show what the characters are looking at first to help the audience understand where the characters are...the less the audience has to the think, the more they will focus on the joke.

Other than that, good stuff man! made me giggle...

WrayProductions responds:

I thank you all for the constructive critiques you have given for my Needs more whales pilot episode. I will take all of your useful feedback and place it in the animated series coming soon. Also when the series is complete check out my website www.wrayonline.freevar.com as i will be including a need more whales mini site.

EASTER EGG NOTICE- If you click the painting of the man in the green shirt on the wall he makes a sound.

[Horsforth]

Good First Effrort

Love the Sweeples. The sound was great, normally you get loads of popping and such on peoples first efforts, so well done. Amusing. I especially love the pirate :)

MikeStand responds:

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[Goldfish]

Great first animation!

With all the rubbish that gets posted by first timers, its a pleasant change to see somebody has actually put the effort in. Very good first animation - you included music, it had humour and it even had a plot. A lot of people might tell you that it was too short - as long as its over thirty seconds, in my opinion, then its fine.

Overall a fantastic first attempt. Well done.

Lubb responds:

thanks man :)